Tuesday, September 18, 2012

Nuclear energy

Firstly and most importantly, nuclear energy is clean and very cheap more than coal and gas.it is widely accepted nuclear energy is clean so when people use it, the ozone will be protected. Moreover, when people stop using coal and gas will be less toxic fumes and CO2 will be reduced. In addition, governments can produce nuclear energy and sell it to other countries so they will develop their economy through it.

Nassar Al zafiri           4G

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  1. Nassar - You MUST be careful to punctuate your writing correctly at this stage of your English studies.

    CORRECTED
    Nuclear energy

    Firstly and most importantly, nuclear energy is clean and cheaper than coal and gas. It is widely accepted that nuclear energy is clean and does not harm the ozone layer compared to fossil fuels. Moreover, when people stop using coal and gas there will be less toxic fumes and CO2 will be reduced. In addition, governments can produce nuclear energy and sell it to other countries which will help to develop their economies.

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