Tuesday, September 18, 2012
Nuclear energy
Nuclear energy is the issue which all countries concentrate because it may povide many energy for the development of a country . However it exist a lot of risk for human health and environment. One of them and most riskly is the the leak of radiation. The terrible earthquake and tsunami in Japan is one of the examples for the leak of radiation.People expose to radioactive or contaminated food or water will increase the risk of cancer. Moreover the danger can affect the next generations. Therefore if there are any accident, they can leave the terrible consequences.
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Ha - Your first sentence is too general for a topic sentence (it would be better for an introductory paragraph)
ReplyDeleteHere is my suggestion for your body paragraph:
Nuclear energy presents a a lot of risks for human health and the environment. One of biggest risks is the the leakage of radiation. The terrible earthquake and tsunami in Japan is one recent examples of the dangers of nuclear energy stations. When people are exposed to radioactive or contaminated food or water, this will increase the risk of cancer later in their life. Moreover the danger can affect future generations. It is clear that nuclear accidents have terrible consequences for a country and its people.